19 May 2018 @ 01:10 pm
Whine Bar  
 Another Saturday, another Whine Bar.

How's the writing coming?

Pull up a barstool and have a glass of whine - we're here to listen.
 
 
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[personal profile] gwenhwyfar1984 on May 20th, 2018 10:38 pm (UTC)
No. It has to be included because it is a turning point in Detective Benson's crisis. It is not an exposition scene, but one where she finally comes to realize that she is in a very bad, dark place. I think, however, that I might be able to change who she has the scene with? Maybe that is the problem.
Thanks! You may have helped!
oldtoadwoman[personal profile] oldtoadwoman on May 20th, 2018 11:49 pm (UTC)
Yay!